Have I mentioned I'm loving this series? Because I really, really do.
I like the combination between the dramatics between Matt and Mohinder's growing relationship and the suspicions with what's happening with Maya and Elle. It connects and flows nicely.
Awww, flustered!Mohinder is all sorts of adorable, and I like that he's all glowy and that he and Matt are getting used to the idea of being inside an established relationship. Of course, there has to be tension between them and poor Mohinder in the end. All the emotions and confusions of what's happening is starting to really get to him. As for Elle and Maya, I suspected it had something to do with Sylar, but it's nice to see that Mohinder isn't one to be duped by either one of them. He's firm with Elle, and allows Maya to open up to him. I do like your Elle-voice, a great mixture of playfulness and vulnerability in all the right places.
Anyway, each chapter is getting better and better. :D
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Date: 2008-02-12 11:35 am (UTC)I like the combination between the dramatics between Matt and Mohinder's growing relationship and the suspicions with what's happening with Maya and Elle. It connects and flows nicely.
Awww, flustered!Mohinder is all sorts of adorable, and I like that he's all glowy and that he and Matt are getting used to the idea of being inside an established relationship. Of course, there has to be tension between them and poor Mohinder in the end. All the emotions and confusions of what's happening is starting to really get to him. As for Elle and Maya, I suspected it had something to do with Sylar, but it's nice to see that Mohinder isn't one to be duped by either one of them. He's firm with Elle, and allows Maya to open up to him. I do like your Elle-voice, a great mixture of playfulness and vulnerability in all the right places.
Anyway, each chapter is getting better and better. :D