I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story so much. Your 30 kisses series was amazing, but this unbelievable awkwardness is such an interesting change. It's not as easy to read, because it is SOOOO well written that it's beautifully uncomfortable and adorably realistic. I am so excited to see what's to come. I really love what you're doing with Elle here. She irritates me in the show quite a bit, but I do like her, and you're focusing a good bit on my favorite aspect of her personality- her vulnerability. I also look forward to Molly's reaction to their budding relationship. And I would be lying if I said I'm not completely giddy over the future awkward!sex. I love how they both thought the same thing when Matt mentioned 'being the girl.' How on earth are they going to sort that one out? Oh, and I think Elle totally needs to find the book that Mohinder bought on the sly and tease him mercilessly about it! Squeee, can't wait for the next installment!
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Date: 2008-02-10 11:42 pm (UTC)Oh, and I think Elle totally needs to find the book that Mohinder bought on the sly and tease him mercilessly about it! Squeee, can't wait for the next installment!