Wow. That was some ending. The "But it's happening" line gave me chills.
Your Elle is really good, too. You've really captured the menacing side of her along with the silly vulnerable side, and that when she's around her father's influence, she is a lot like him.
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Date: 2008-02-05 12:15 am (UTC)Your Elle is really good, too. You've really captured the menacing side of her along with the silly vulnerable side, and that when she's around her father's influence, she is a lot like him.
I can't wait to see where this side goes!