I think maybe you are too hard on yourself, my dear. Because this was absolutely, angrily, lovely.
You managed to create a kiss where is wasn't storystorystorykissend. Instead, it was angeranger{withstory}kissconfusionkiss{hinto'sextocome}end. And I loved it! {Please pardon the bizarre format of ^}
And utilizing a cliche but managing to keep it from being ridiculous and unreadable, AND using all three of the family characters = WIN. And, like many previous commenters, I absolutely adored the part where Matt barged back into the apartment because he couldn't sleep and then basically vomited a torrent of words. It was glorious. Seriously, glorious.
Thank you so much, once again, for sharing, and have a good day at work, my dear.
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Date: 2007-12-26 04:57 pm (UTC)You managed to create a kiss where is wasn't storystorystorykissend. Instead, it was angeranger{withstory}kissconfusionkiss{hinto'sextocome}end. And I loved it! {Please pardon the bizarre format of ^}
And utilizing a cliche but managing to keep it from being ridiculous and unreadable, AND using all three of the family characters = WIN. And, like many previous commenters, I absolutely adored the part where Matt barged back into the apartment because he couldn't sleep and then basically vomited a torrent of words. It was glorious. Seriously, glorious.
Thank you so much, once again, for sharing, and have a good day at work, my dear.