The scene with Ted made me smile and go awww... I really miss Ted in the show!
So, Mohinder's actually scared of lions? Or is he just nervous in Matt's presence? And what happened to his sister?
I absolutely love how you describe Matt's attraction to Mohinder and his confusion/fear about his own feelings:
There might as well have been nothing beneath his feet at all, because he wasn't sure he wasn't falling to his death. His whole body was tingling. He could feel each individual molecule of air brushing past his skin. Oh boy, Matt's falling hard for Mohinder! :D
The Petrelli boys are awesome, as always. :D
Ehm... ideas? Well, I would love to see Sylar, maybe as someone who's hell-bent to ruin the circus and/or as a rival for Mohinder's love? I'm also intrigued by the Petrellis' reaction to Mohinder; maybe that's something you can use? Oh, and I want to know more about Mohinder's sister! :) Whichever way you decide to go with this fic, I'm looking forward to reading more!
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Date: 2008-09-01 09:39 am (UTC)So, Mohinder's actually scared of lions? Or is he just nervous in Matt's presence? And what happened to his sister?
I absolutely love how you describe Matt's attraction to Mohinder and his confusion/fear about his own feelings:
There might as well have been nothing beneath his feet at all, because he wasn't sure he wasn't falling to his death. His whole body was tingling. He could feel each individual molecule of air brushing past his skin. Oh boy, Matt's falling hard for Mohinder! :D
The Petrelli boys are awesome, as always. :D
Ehm... ideas? Well, I would love to see Sylar, maybe as someone who's hell-bent to ruin the circus and/or as a rival for Mohinder's love? I'm also intrigued by the Petrellis' reaction to Mohinder; maybe that's something you can use? Oh, and I want to know more about Mohinder's sister! :) Whichever way you decide to go with this fic, I'm looking forward to reading more!