No, I definitely don't think she's out of character. What you've done with her is a completely believable direction for her to go in. She clearly has a deep urge to please her father, and he's screwed her up in some bad ways, but she's shown some moments of sensitivity and I think the right influences could make her more likable/moral in the show. Anyway, I love how you write the interactions between her and Mohinder, and don't think it's OOC at all! Any predictions for when the next part will be ready? No pressure (well, maybe a little pressure :-P)