ext_10273 ([identity profile] rogueslayer452.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tiptoe39 2008-02-03 11:36 pm (UTC)

Another great chapter. Just the fact that their relationship is progressing is good enough for me.

I like the subtle changes too, like with Maya and Matt's jealousy, with Mohinder and Matt actually forming a friendship which could lead to something more. That ending bit was nicely written. They know how they feel and how the other feels, but it is never really said directly and just from their dialogue alone I can see happening between two guys who feel a mutual attraction to each other. The whole "it shouldn't be happening but it is" and "what should we do?" right down to the kiss. I can't wait to see how all this evolves from that.

Oh, and I liked the other stuff that was happening in the chapter, too. I feel bad for Maya, she literally has no one else to turn to or to trust except for Mohinder who saved her life. Can't wait for more. :)

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