I really like the awkwardness that you convey between the two of them, especially in the dialogue - I like the way that although they're totally committed to caring for Molly, they're still really unsure of each other. I also like the way they're not sure of their feelings around each other, and that although there is something almost tangible there between them, neither can put their fingers quite on what it is, nor would they need to at this stage.

I like that your kinda keeping true to the plot as well - can't wait for the next one, and the inevitable smooching that just so has to happen!