That was perfect! Matt's envy and later "victory" over Mohinder were palpable. I hated reading it, which is a compliment, because you so perfectly captured what that feeling is like. You really made Matt and Mohinder seem like real people, in both their ugliness and their sweetness, and your dialogue is so smooth and in-character it just swept me along. I cannot, cannot, cannot wait to see what you come up with next.
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