ext_49310 ([identity profile] g0shawk.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tiptoe39 2009-02-28 08:34 pm (UTC)

*flails* Soooooo good!! XD You're really amazing at the emotions. And the thoughts, and the descriptions, and, well, everything. I love how you incorporated the flashbacks while having Valentine's Day last throughout. There were so many lines that I loved, but this is one that really stuck out for me: This embrace is a doorway, and Mohinder is home.

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