*smiles* that's good to know. Sometimes people get really insulted when you make constructive critiques of their work. I'm glad you're not that way. I totally understand your wishing to stick with your words here, and I can appreciate that as I said, I do appreciate the use of words like that, but in this case, I felt it took away from my experience because I had to pause and look them up. Mind you it was only two words out of I don't know how many, so.. but I imagine my grasp on vocabulary is fairly average thought in the past I'm sure it was more than that. I can appreciate a challenge now and again, so it didn't ruin the story for me at all. I sometimes enjoy learning new words. I'm perhaps due for change in book reading...though I will always love my romance novels...perhaps I need to read something else. *shrug* I do enjoy reading your works my dear, just so you know. I don't think you're over-educated at all. I find you're eloquent, and brilliant writer...who captures these characters as if you had somehow lived inside their heads, and hearts. Not many writers can capture that, and you have. *applauds you* really, you are spectacular.

that's all I can ask, is that you keep it in mind in the future. *smishes you*

I love this story. It's by far, one of my all time favorites!